Emily and the Oracle

Ah, thank you, you two! I will get to editing right away! There is something about this story that makes me sit back and relax and not think of anything. ...

Thank you so much you all

Ah, how excited I get whenever I see your critique, Esme. I will get to work right away! It's actually funny, because some of the things you mentioned rephrasing, I've ...

First off, I want to say, as room101 and mizz-iceberg already pointed out, this seems far too short to be a chapter. Unless you want a very short book (I've ...

Alright- some things fixed up. However, I'd like to, er...critique your critique. I know this is terribly rude, but I want to point some...er, some things out. First off- dialogue. ...

Alright, in my defense, this chapter was written without the first chapter in front of me, and therefore I couldn't get in the mood, nor did I have an actual ...

Esme- After your critique, I said exactly this: "Whooa." Gave me a headache, it did! But I also nearly fainted with love for you. It made me realize so many ...

Well, it doesn't take too hard to figure out what the woman in the woods is (I think that's the one you were talking about?). Kathira is cold, lost in ...

that was fantastic. i loved it, its got great character and potential. i understood the part of your story with Kathira's woods so dont worry, your visuals were pretty good ...

I see what you mean...I thought I was doing pretty good with visualizing, but I will certainly work on it! As for the example, not to back talk or critic ...